From: Cylvia Hayes

Sent: Sun Apr 07 11:33:53 2013

To: 'Tolvstad Karen * HCS'

Subject: RE: Next steps

Importance: Normal

You are so gracious.  J

Cylvia Hayes

First Lady of Oregon

cylhayes@gmail.com

(503) 373-7489

From: Tolvstad Karen * HCS [mailto:karen.tolvstad@state.or.us]

Sent: Sunday, April 07, 2013 10:54 AM

To: Sarah Tripp Stephan

Cc: Cylvia Hayes; LEE Robert * HCS

Subject: Next steps

Happy Sunday, Sarah. Robert, Cylvia and I just got off a conference call to compare our thoughts on version 3.

We were all very lined up and think we can move to our final version on our own this afternoon. So you get to have Sunday off!

Your first-person, fresh orientation and key inspiring paragraphs will be well-received by our group of stakeholders. We're going to take out some of the specific program examples in there now to keep it a high level introduction and add back some of the points from the original draft, re-worded to fit the feel of the new draft. Then, we will pull the call for the policy debate and doing things differently toward the front.

That will be easy for Robert to do. Then Cylvia and I will fuss with the flow and final edits have something all ready to present to our group tomorrow.

Thank you very much for your quick work and your flexibility with your hours. We appreciate it!

Karen